Minggu, 19 April 2015

NARRATIVE AND RECOUNT TEXT (Compiled by Wahju Indrawati SMPN 2 Jombang)

NARRATIVE TEXT

Once upon a time, there was a selfish and greedy man who lost thirty gold coins. He went to his friend’s house and told her how he lost his gold coins. His friend was a kind woman.
As the woman’s daughter was walking along the street, she found thirty gold coins. When she arrived home, she told her mother what she had found. The girl’s mother told her that the gold coins belonged to her friend and she asked him to come. When the selfish man arrived, she told him how her daughter had found his thirty gold coins and handed them to him.
However, after counting the gold coins, the man said that ten of them were missing. He accused the girl of taking the coins, as he had forty gold coins. He added that he would claim the outstanding 10 gold coins from her, but the woman refused.
Then, the man went to court and informed the judge about what had taken place between him and the girl’s mother. When the girl and her mother arrived, the judge asked the girl how many gold coins she found. She replied thirty. The judge then asked the selfish man how many gold coins he had lost and he answered forty.
The judge then told the man that the gold coins did not belong to him, because the girl found thirty- gold coins, not forty as he claimed. If anybody was looking for thirty gold coins, he would send for the girl. On the contrary, if forty gold coins were found, he would send them for the man.
Finally, the man confessed that he lied and lost only thirty gold coins. However, the judge did not listen to him.

RECOUNT TEXT

I had never been camping before I met my best friend, Jacklyn. I didn’t know that camping meant sleeping out in nature, in a tent. I guess I didn’t really think about it at all.
We were off to a nearby campground. We drove in and paid for our site. It was beautiful. There were ducks and a small lake and up on the hill there was a pool and small store if you needed anything.
At dusk we lit our fire. It was very nice and pleasant. However I had a small allergy problem with mosquitoes. I hate bugs, and mosquitoes seem to be the worse, due to their stinging and being irritating. It was awful, but the camp fire was nice. Jacklyn told me about her camping stories. They were really interesting.
After a full night of stories and fire, we settled in out the tent. We slept in our sleeping bags on the ground. To my surprise, the ground was not wet, and we had a small air mattress under us. Of course, the mattress wasn’t as comfortable as mine at home but it was no problem.
Then in the middle of the night I heard scuffling just out of our tent. I woke Jacklyn and I told her that there was a bear in our camp. She told me to just go back to sleep. I really didn’t know that there were bears in local camp grounds.
The next morning I woke to the same noises and found the culprit. It was ducks. I felt so stupid. To this day we still talked about my first camping trip.

It was a very memorable experience.  

93 komentar:

  1. Q: In the narrative text above, who was lying about the amount of coins?
    A: The person who was lying is the selfish man.
    (Amira Amalia no.04 VIII-B)

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  2. Which can be taken from the narrative text above , do not be too greedy , because greed can grab all the desired items
    ( Selvi Armidya / 27 VIII-B )

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  3. Q : What is the purpose of narrative text above??
    A : Which can be taken from the story above
    We must ber self reformation , not to the nature appears in ourselves .
    ( Helmi Alwan Nugroho / 10 VIII-B )

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    1. dear helmi, you mean moral value or pupose?
      the purpose is to entertain ....
      thanks

      Hapus
    2. I'm sorry mam, i mean the question is: what is the moral value of the narrative text above? Thank you 😄😁

      Hapus
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    1. Dear sany, are you sure thirty? forty or thirty?
      what is the reason?

      Hapus
  5. Q: Depend on the recount text above, who had never been camping before?
    A: The writer had never been camping before.
    (Retno Anggreini / 24 VIII-B)

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    1. absolutely correct Almira.
      'GREAT", Why dont you try to to listen of narrative text video of belinda and write down "What did salsa say in that video" ? You'll get the best mark for the first comment.Yap ..Try!!

      Hapus
    2. Wow thank you very much Mrs. Wahyu, feel so excited to hear that. I have listened to Belinda's narrative text video and posted my comment there. And.. btw just to clarify, the comment above is Retno's, thank you ma'am:)

      Hapus
    3. Yap Right, It's above belongs to Retno's
      Thanks Almira

      Hapus
  6. Q : In the recount text above ,why the writer feel so stupid ?
    A : Because in the text , when in the middle of the night she (the writer) heard scuffling and she out of her tent.She told Jacklyn that there was a bear in their camp. Then in the morning she woke to same noises and found the culprit. It was duck.And she felt so stupid
    (Dinar Restu Ivanie/ 08 / VIII E)

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    1. Yap right, Dinar. Thanks
      But little correction for the question. you must add the auxilary " did" in the question.
      Why did the writer feel so stupid?

      Hapus
  7. Q : In the narrative text above, who had found thirty gold coins belonging to a selfish and greedy man?
    A : which found that thirty gold coins is a woman's daughter or the selfish & greedy man friend's daughter
    (Nikmatul Izzah / 16/ VIII E)

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    1. Dear Nikmatul, your question is correct, thanks.
      But you must concern to your answer, like this " a woman's daughter or the selfish & greedy man friend's daughter" who found thirty god coins.

      Hapus
  8. Q: What should I do judge it? Why judge it silent?
    A: What should be done is to give the judge the sentence to him for having accused others because of greed for money.
    (Elzhara Dinda K.D/09/VIII-B)

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    1. Dear Elzhara good, thanks
      a bit correction in the question

      Hapus
  9. Q: How the character of all the players in the story ???
    A: men: selfish, dishonest
    women: kind, honest
    Mother: kind, honest
    Judge: thoughtful, intelligent
    ( Callista Dora Islamey Pasya/07/VIII-B )

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    1. great callista, thanks. Add the word " was" in the question.
      How was the character of all the players in the story ???

      Hapus
  10. Q : What she say to her mother?
    A : She say she found 30 gold coins

    (Sintya Cahyani / 28 / VIII-B)

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    1. Dear sintya, both your question and answer are good.
      But please correct the grammar.Thanks

      Hapus
  11. Q : At dusk they lit the fire. It was very nice and pleasant. However he has a small problem. What the problem?
    A : He has a allergy with mosquitoes.


    (Widyanto Ikhsan Krisnanto / 29 / VIII-B)

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    1. Dear ikhsan, very good thanks. attention for the tenses.
      " has" must be" had"
      What was the problem?
      Btw ikhsan and also hubaitm both of you must look at procedure text video" how to make kite". I'll be waiting.

      Hapus
  12. Q : In the recount text above ,why did the writer hate bugs and mosquitoes?
    A : The writer hate bugs and mosquitoes because their stinging and being irritating
    (Alifannisa Hasnur Islamy / 03 / VIII-E )

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  13. Who lost gold coins?
    the lost gold coins is selfish man
    (Jihan Citra Dewi/13/VIII-B)

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    1. Yap right Jihan but the best answer is:
      Selfish man did

      Hapus
  14. Q : how many the character from this narrative text...?

    A : there are four character from this narrative text

    (muhammad hamdani 8b/17)

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    1. Dear Hamdany,
      Better to say Characters not character, Thanks

      Hapus
  15. Q : why did the man go to the court...?

    A : because, he accused the girl of taking the coins, as he had forty gold coins. He added that he would clam the outstanding 10 gold coins from her.

    (muhammad dendy hariyanto 8b/16

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  16. Q:what the end of the narrative story above?
    A:Finally, the man confessed that he lied and lost only thirty gold coins. However, the judge did not listen to him.


    (Mochamad Hafidh Masruri/15/8 B)

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    1. " was"
      what was the end of the narrative story above?
      thanks jihan

      Hapus
    2. sorry... not jihan but hafid. thanks

      Hapus
  17. Q:Who many character in the recount text?
    A:2 character is jackly and I
    (Nurmydra Savesetri N/23/VIII-B)

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    1. Dear Nurmyndra, not who but How
      How many characters ....
      Thanks

      Hapus
  18. Q : What is the title recount text above?
    A:My first adventure with my best friend
    (Rindang Faricha P/25/VIII-B)

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    1. yap good Rindang..
      " of"
      What is the tittle of the text above?

      Hapus
  19. Q : In the narrative text above, after counting the gold coins, the man said that some coins were missing. how much coins were missing?
    A : Ten gold coins were missing.

    (Intan Permata T./12/VIII-B)

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    1. Good Intan...
      better to say : How many coins were missing?

      Hapus
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  21. Q : what the result being a selfish and greedy ?
    A : as a result of being a greedy and eogis was shunned by friends and hated others
    (Nur Aini Lutfiyah / 17 / VIII E)

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    1. Dear Nur Ainy Very good Thanks
      a bit correction:
      what was the result of being a selfish and greedy ?

      Hapus
  22. Q : What do the man after a girl found his thirty gold coins ?
    A : arrogant and greedy men had accused the girl took the coin , because he has forty gold coins . He added that he would claim 10 gold coins
    (Adelia Rahrdiningrum / 01 / VIII E)

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    1. Good Adelia. Thanks
      A bit correction:
      What did the man do after a girl found his thirty gold coins ?

      Hapus
  23. Q : What allergic is experienced author in the text ?
    A : the writer had a small allergy problem with mosquitoes. She hate bugs, and mosquitoes seem to be the worse, due to their stinging and being irritating.
    (Sherani Athari F. / 22 / VIII E)

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    1. Dear Sherany good thanks.
      Will you correct Your Questoin please....

      Hapus
  24. Q : In the middle of the story, where did the man go to tell what had taken place between him and the girl’s mother?
    A : The man went to court and informed to the judge about what had been going on
    (Nadiya Amani F./21/8-B)

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  25. Bu, maaf, "the write" diganti menjadi "the writer"
    trimakasih...
    (Nuri Fathriya/8-B)

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  26. Q: why did the writer woke up in the middle night?
    A: because, the writer heard scuffling just out of their tent

    (Nuri Fathriya M./22/8-B)

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    1. Dear Nuri Very good
      Woke up must be changed into wake up.Thanks

      Hapus
  27. Q: why did the writer woke up in the middle night?
    A: because, the writer heard scuffling just out of their tent

    (Nuri Fathriya M./22/8-B)

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  28. Assalamualaikum Hello Mrs. Wahyu
    I want to conclude your text narration, that the contents of the text is a man who is selfish and greedy and accusing people without any evidence that the person who helped him find the missing gold coins
    then he was caught lying and admit his lies
    thank you

    (M. Abi Ikhwanudin /15/8E)

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  29. Hello Mrs. Wahyu
    I will give suggestions for narrative text
    Do not be selfish and greedy!
    And like accusing people without evidence of accurate, precise and secure!
    If you want to accuse people prepare the proof!

    (Aditya Dharma R / 02 / 8E)

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  30. I will provide feedback about the narrative text
    that the text is very good because it contains less good behavior in a woman that he should not be accused grateful haphazardly without evidence and it should not be imitated

    (Frandy Wahyu Imawan 8E / 11)

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  31. Q : In the recount text above, Who is Jacklyn?
    A : Jacklyn is the writer's best friend.

    (Daru Setya A. /08/ 8B)

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    1. dear Daru thanks for you comment, that's very good.
      But better to use to be "was" instead of "is"

      Hapus
  32. Q :why did he not like mosquitoes?
    A :because mosquitoes irritating and annoying.

    (Muh. Ari Sidqul Muzaki /18/8B)

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    1. Dear Ari, Thanks or your comment very very good.
      Will you correct the grammar of both sentences.

      Hapus
  33. Q : Actually, what was disturbing the writer and Jacklyn?
    A : It was duck that was disturbing them.
    (Arsy Nafidasari N./06/8-B)

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  34. Q : Who is the writer's best friend in the recount text above?
    A : The writer's best friend in the recount text above is Jacklyn
    ( Mochamad Misbachussudur / 14 / 8E )

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    1. Hem Bachus both your question and answer are correct.
      but it will be better using to be was instead of is, thanks

      Hapus
  35. Q: In the narrative text of the above, why he lied?
    A: because the person who is lying is a selfish person.
    (A. Arif Alfianto /01/8-B)

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    1. Good Arif, thanks
      correction:
      why did he lie?
      is - was

      Hapus
  36. Q : in the recount text above, waht is the writer's problem ?
    A : the writer's problem is mosquito allergy
    ( Nursheilla Zanuba - 18 / 8E )

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    1. Hi Nursheilla, good thanks
      Why dont you use to be " was" ?

      Hapus
  37. Q: In the recount text above, what memorable experience has been experienced the writer?
    A: Do a camping with her bestfriend, Jacklyn
    ( Arsyi Ananda Putri / 05 / 8E )

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  38. Dear Arshy Very good thanks

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  39. What titles are suitable for the above narrative text ?
    J : title suitable for the above narrative text is greedy man

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  40. nama : syaiful mirza
    no : 25
    kelas 8 e
    thank you

    BalasHapus
  41. Oke mam, like this
    Q : How the character of all the players in the story???

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  42. Recount text
    Q : Why in the next moring the writer felt so stupid???
    A : Because the writer woke to the same noises, and he thought that he found the culprit, but actually it was ducks
    ( Memee Wandani/15/VIII-C )

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  43. Hello Mrs. Wahyu Indrawati
    I’m so sorry Mrs. Wahyu Indrawati, i’m late to send a comment, because i’m forget date to send a comment

    i’m very not like that man. He accuse direct her take the 10 coins, but actually he lost 30 coins. And then he claim the 10 coins to court. He feel true not false. But after clarification all, the man proven wrong accuse. Finally he admit to her that he wrong accuse .

    He accuse her as crazy man. The man not think especially previous. The man also lied. All behavior that man do not to imitate, because that is can change our behavior become ugly.
    (Yuda Ramadhan Syahputra / 29 / VIII - E)

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  45. Sorry Mom, i was delete my post.
    Q: What wisdom can we take from selfish man?
    A: We must not tell lies, because the fair is everywhere and God is always with us, as it will only make us embarrassed
    [ Bilkis Nabilla Putri / VIII-D / 05 ]

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  46. Assalamualaikum
    Hello Mrs. Wahju :D How are you ?? I miss you

    From the narrative text above we can learn that we must be honest and avoid selfishness because selfishness can get us to the bad behavior. And we should always be grateful.

    (Sandra Oktavia / 22 / 8D)

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  47. Narrative Text
    I want to write the message of the story. I think the story about the selfish and greedy man teaches us to be an honest and unselfish person. We will gain nothing by cheating and lying to get what we want. It will only makes people do not trust us.
    Recount Text
    My opinion about the text is it is very interesting and funny. It's funny because the character didn't even know about camping. the character was not a brave person because he/she was scared for small thing such as the noise without knowing what it really was. The story makes me wonder if the character was a city boy/girl because he/she didn't even know that camping meant sleeping outside.
    ( Rochmanida Hana S./ 20/ 8-D )

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  48. Q : from the narrative text above, what lesson we can take from the story?
    A : don't be greedy, because telling the truth is better.

    (Niken Andhita I. / 17 / VIII-D)

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  49. Q : from the narrative text above, why selfish man reported the girl and her mother to court?
    A : because the girl has found 30 gold coins. However, after counting the gold coins, he said that ten of them were missing. He accused the girl took the coin, because he was forty gold coins. He added that he would claim 10 gold coins in circulation from him, but she refused.
    (Farisa Nur Af'idah / 07 / VIII-F)

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  50. Q : how the end of the narrative text above ?
    A : finally, the man confessed that he lied and lost only thirty gold coins. However, the judge did not listen to him.
    ( Welda Ayu Meyza L./ 25/ 8-D )

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  51. Q: Depend on the recount text above, why did the writer say "It was a very memorable experience." ?
    A: Because, it was first time the writer go camping with his best friend.
    (Ahmad Khoirudin /02/ VIII-D)

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  52. where she was find the gold coin ? she was find the gold cin in the street(muhammad nur wahid/18/8F)

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  53. Q: In the narrative text above, what the problem of the selfish man ?

    A: The problem is he lost thirty gold coins

    (Ingwang Prasanggi/10/VIII-C)

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  54. Q: In The Narrative text, how many gold coins she found?

    A: She found thirty gold coins

    (Abid In'am Majid/01/VIII-C)

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  55. Q : In the recount text above, How many character in the text ??
    A : There are 2 character Jackly and I

    (M iqbal himawan/12/8-F)

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